What a great premise for a children’s book, a little boy, Musa, does not want to clean his room, and imagines all the better things he will get to do in Jannah (heaven) instead. Luckily for his room, his sister comes to help him tidy it up, as well as his mom and dad.
The rhyme scheme and the kids’ imaginations at how wonderful Jannah will be, go hand in hand and make the book silly and fun. The cartoonish illustrations also help sneak in messages of listening to your parents, cleaning your room, being kind to your siblings, helping each other, and ultimately doing things even if they are hard or boring to please Allah swt.
The book is a 28 page, 8×8, paperback. The price is a little steep, $12, for its structure, in my opinion and is meant for Muslim readers. The only real issue I had is when the mom threatens to flounce Musa. “Stop jumping and bouncing, or you’ll get a flouncing,” seems excessive to me, and not consistent with how loving the family is throughout the rest of the book. It was probably included to maintain the rhyme scheme, but I took it to be a threat of violence, which I’m not ok with.
The pictures show the mom in hijab, the word Jannah instead of heaven is used, the characters’ names are Islamic and Allah is mentioned throughout. Musa’s thoughts on the last page are particularly sweet (see picture below). I plan to read this to a group of kids at story time and will just omit the flouncing line, as it does well in appealing to ages 4 and up. Three year olds may not understand it, but because of the rhyming, I think they will be equally entertained.
Assalamu alaikum, I don’t know if I ever commented on this post or chatted with you or read the review. Jazak Allah khair for the review. Almost two years later I look back at my book and wonder if it got very far. This was so good to read. P.S. I’m the author. 😉